There is a pleasure in the pathless woods;
There is a rapture on the lonely shore;
There is society, where none intrudes,
By the deep sea, and music in its roar:
I love not man the less, but Nature more...
(Lord Byron)

Tuesday 19 April 2011

Correction of post's Victor Nuñez



A Field trip
One of my best field trips was the one who (ww) from  made (nn) ​​the subject of biogeography (sp) Biogeography, It (sm) was in the third year of university.
I went (sm) Went to the hill Manquehue, (p) and (sm) It was especially fun because we got to know field (ww) scientific names and the different characteristics of the species that exist there. I really liked it, (p) although (sm) at first I (sm) was not very motivated, but over time the teacher explained everything very clearly, (p) and  like this, or later (sm), I (sm) motivated me a lot. 
It has a "sclerophyllous forest type". (wt) "sclerophyllous type forest”.  It (nn) Here (sm) There (sp) there are trees as a (nn) Peumo, Quillay, Litre, Bollén, Chequén y Maitén. There are few shrubs such as (ww) like guayacán. In the field trip, (p) we know (ww) (we knew is the past to know) most of these species mentioned above, its features and how to recognize them easily, its (sm) scientific names, and why they thrive in this sector.
The sector of Cerro Manquehue (1.600m) includes other minor peaks, but (ww) that they offer a pleasant adventure to or of (sm) a few hours, as is the Manquehuito (1.300 m) to the east, (p) and Mount Carbon (wf) “Monte de Carbón” becuase is personal noun, a toponimo (1.350m) to the west. The Cerro San Cristobal and Santa Lucia, true urban parks, are the western tip of this cord.
In the field trip we did not get to the top of the hill, although many of my classmates if they wanted to reach the top, but as far as (wf) but what we move (ww) moved, (p) was enough to know the species that interested us (wf) we were interested, because is past time.


Note: Never a personal noun is omitted from its verb.

Simbology: p= punctuation; sp= spelling; ww= wrong word; sm= something missing; nn= not needed; wt= wrong tense; wf= wrong form.

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